sales letter

[eguminski]

Hi
Recently I ordered from my writer sales letter.
Can you tell me from your experience what you can change in this sales letter?
My ebook for sale is "Planning a Themed wedding"
as a bonus is "Cutting wedding Costs"
I appreciate your comments.
Thanks
Ewa



The Economical Way to Plan Your Wedding
• Are you planning to get married soon?
• Do you want your special day to be memorable?
• Are you envisioning walking through the altar in the most extravagant gown or tuxedo?
• Do you want all the persons close to you be present on your wedding day?
• Are you preparing for a big reception venue?

BUT…
• Does your limited budget keep you from planning your dream wedding?
• While you are on your preparation stage, do you run into a lot of trouble in realigning your needs and wants?
• Are you worried that after your wedding day, there are still some credits to settle?
• Have you already poured your entire budget on your wedding day and reception and taken for granted your honeymoon because of your short funds?

If you answered yes to two or more to the questions above, you might be reading the best book that could help you plan your dream wedding. How do you want your wedding to be done in the luxurious way you have planned while working on a limited budget? You should keep on reading!

When planning your wedding, you should always remember that it is one of the most important events of your life and it could only happen once in your lifetime. As such, it should be memorable and an event free from worries. Your life after your wedding should be an enough concern for you.

Planning your wedding entails a lot of work but planning it the right way with the right budget will keep your hands away from too much work. You can still find yourself sitting pretty in the corner while you keep things working as you planned it. When planning, you should keep your eyes and hands into every detail. You do not want running and rushing for things on the very date of the wedding. Certainly, there are so many ways when you can more than two eyes and two hands to do all the work for your big day. Imagine a big event all set and all you have to do is to wait for your turn to walk toward your groom or bride and see your guest enjoying everything you have prepared for them.

Though your wedding could be the grandest event that you will experience, it should not be the most expensive one. There are still more events where you can allot your money into. However, budgeting should not also consume a big chunk of your planning time, there are still a lot more to do and take into consideration. Remember that you’re money is not only your sole concern, your time and effort as well; and may be those of other people, too, whom you want to include in your planning.

Your wedding planning may get tougher as you go and can give you a lot of headaches but mentioned, when you do it right, you can have an enjoyable journey toward your big day. Your wedding planning should not be a great task for you to bear but your memorable journey together with your would-be wife or husband.

With all those in mind, you may consider planning your wedding with a theme. Themed wedding is the prevailing trend for most weddings around the world to today. When you decide to host a dream themed wedding, it is when the e-book Planning a Themed Wedding can help you. It presents comprehensive descriptions to help you in your step by step planning. More than that, it comes with another e-book that teaches how you can cut the expenses for your themed wedding. Cutting Wedding Costs shows you how you can have the greatest deals in everything that you need to prepare for your wedding.

Planning a Themed Wedding gives you an understanding in certain aspects of planning your themed wedding.
 It suggests what types of theme could be most affordable for you.
 It shows you how to choose best themed wedding destinations.
 It includes planning tips for the ceremony and reception which you can adopt and enjoy for your own planning.
 It presents a sample wedding budget and the costs of the things that you need to have and accomplish.
 It gives you ideas on how to get the cheapest services from the photography or video, to food and other favors for your wedding.
 It gives options whether to work with a wedding planner whom you can entrust some stuff for your wedding or with wedding planning software which you can install with your computer and serve as a reminder and keeper of your plans.
 It lists important details that you should follow during your wedding planning timeframe.
 Lastly, it enumerates wedding planning mistakes that you should put in mind and you can avoid by following the tips.

Planning a Themed Wedding offers you a broad understanding on how to plan your themed wedding and cutting the costs of your dream come true wedding. Cutting Wedding Costs, on the other hand, presents the particulars in using your theme to save money on your great day and to plan it carefully on a limited budget.

Cutting Wedding Costs helps you juggle your limited fund while accommodating all your wedding needs. Generally, it is the “how tos” in your planning.

 It helps how to create your budget like what should have the largest share in your budget and what things you can take off your list.
 It presents how you do plan your timeline like what things you should devout more of your time and what can other people take care of.
 It shows where, when and what are places, dates and things you should consider in choosing the ceremony and reception venues.
 It gives tips on how to get affordable but worthy deals on catering, decoration, invitation, clothing, photography, music, jewelry and favors during the big day and the events prior to it.

After reading and taking into accounts what are written in the e-books, you could just imagine a worry-free themed wedding planning working on a limited budget. It would still be a memorable and one of the greatest days of your life but you will be set apart among the rest because of hosting an inexpensive wedding but giving you and your guests, one the best wedding they could ever attend. Again, your limited budget should not hinder you for elegance during your big day.

So start clearing your mind from worries and start planning your wedding. Your first step should be to click that order button and start downloading. Downloading and reading will take some of your time but you could save more of your time and efforts because of the comprehensive and effective tips.

[JimmyChen]

Ewa,

For me, writing a sales letter is still the hardest part of launching a product/service online. My advice to you is not to be cheap on this. Search around and look for a copywriter who has a past record on writing sales copy that CONVERTS!

Here's a perspective on the importance of a good copywriting. If you are charging $20 per ebook and you are able to get 1 sale for every 100 visitors, that's $20 in total revenue.
Let's say your average traffic is 500/day. That's 5 sales = $100/day or $3,000/month.

Now if your updated sales copy can increase the conversion to another 0.5%, your monthly revenue will increase to a whopping 50%! That's $1,500 extra every month.

That is why I would rather spend more on a good copywriter.
It will cost you anywhere around $3,000 or more for a decent one.
I can tell you it's worth it.


Jimmy

[josh]

Ewa,

I certainly agree with Jimmy; your sales copy can definitely make or break your success with any product, and it is one of the most important keys to success or failure in business. It would be ideal if you could learn how to do this process yourself and outsource other activities, because of the immense importance of it; however, if you absolutely don't have time, then make sure you find a top notch copywriter.

As for the sales letter itself, is this your headline (The Economical Way to Plan Your Wedding)? If so, you will definitely want a more compelling headline that will grab attention, something that tells them they absolultey have to read the letter. Also, while you did include some bulleted points, you should have more bold, large font headlines throughout the sales letter that help the skimmers understand what your saying.

Remember, there are two kinds of readers on the net; those who skim and those who read the whole thing. Your sales letter is more designed for somebody willing to read through the entire letter, which many people will not do.

Since Cutting Wedding Costs is your bonus, make sure you emphasize that, so the reader feels like they are getting more than they are paying. I don't believe that you say anywhere in the sales letter that this is a bonus, which is certainly a point you want to trumpet.

Finally, I'm not sure if you just left this part out, but you definitely want to have several P.S.s, and use them to remind readers of your biggest selling points, like a money back guarantee (which is something else I noticed you didn't have), bonuses, etc. This again caters to the skimmers who didn't take the time to read these points above.

To illustrate what I'm talking about, I'd definitely recommend reading some really good copywriters and how they write their sales letters. The best one I can think of on the internet is Yanik Silver, and his main website is surefiremarketing.com. From here, he has a link to many of his sales letters, and you can easily go through and read quite a few in a short time.

The bottom line is, I'd definitely recommend you learn to write copy yousrelf, becaue there are few activities you can do for your business that have a greater return on investment. However, if you absolutely feel like you don't have time for this, then definitely find a top notch copywriter, even if you do have to pay some extra cash.

Regards,

Josh